Wikipedia:Peer review/February 15, 2003 anti-war protest/archive2

February 15, 2003 anti-war protest edit

Wikipedia:Peer review/February 15, 2003 anti-war protest/archive1

This article has improved alot since it last had a peer review. It has gone from a long choppy list to a detailed and well referanced article(it has 59 seperate sources). It details the background to the event and the effects as well as details of day itself.

I believe the artile is comprehensive, factually accurate, neutral, and stable and would like to know how it can improved further so that it could achive featured article status.--JK the unwise 14:10, 26 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Terms in bold in the lead should not be linked (at least that's what I remember the last time I checked, I can't seem to verify that now)

De-linked.--JK the unwise 13:28, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:MOS, the first letters of words in heading should not be capitalized unless: 1) it is a proper noun or 2) it is the first word of the heading.

Changed "Other Areas in Asia" to "Other areas in Asia" which was the only one that I could find. I am assuming that "Western Europe" is a proper noun.--JK the unwise 13:28, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

As is done in WP:FOOTNOTE, for footnotes, the footnote should be located right after the punctuation mark, such that there is no space inbetween. For example, change blah blah [2]. to blah blah.[2]

I have moved all the fullstops that occured before the ref's to after the ref's.--JK the unwise 14:00, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

D'oh!, I have just reolised that I misread this comment and I have changed all the fullstops in the wroung direction! I'll have to fix this tommorrow.--JK the unwise 14:40, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed.--JK the unwise 14:48, 1 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:CONTEXT and WP:MOSDATE, years, decades, and centuries without full dates generally should not be linked. For example, January 2006 should not be linked, instead change it to January 2006. Also, please note WP:BTW and WP:CONTEXT, which state that years with full dates should be linked. For example, February 28, 2006, should be come February 28, 2006.

There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged. For example, Polar is/are a bit short.

Now its a bit longer.--JK the unwise 10:07, 2 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:WIAFA, Images should have concise captions.

Captions shortend.--JK the unwise 10:07, 2 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:MOSNUM, at Units of measurement, numbers with SI units of measure should have conversions in US customary units and vice versa. These conversions should keep to similar values of precision. For example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth". Note that the converted unit of measure uses a standard abbreviation, while the source unit is spelled out in the text.

Added km coversion of distance of Glasglow march and °F conversion for tempreture of Canada protests and mi/h conversion for windspeed on a Canada demo.--JK the unwise 10:43, 2 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:MOSNUM, there should be a no-break space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.

Done.--JK the unwise 10:48, 2 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
Thanks, AndyZ _t 21:37, 26 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]