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A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for July 2008.

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It seems that my concept of prose intersects only marginally with the rest of the world's, so that's the first thing I'm looking for. Any gaping holes in the historical record are also of more than a little interest. Maury (talk) 02:08, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, you may want to post this request on the talk page of the WikiProject Aircraft as well to attract additional reviewers.--McSly (talk) 02:50, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done! Got some nice hits too. Maury (talk) 12:44, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've received an astonishing amount of help cleaning up the article. I think it's safe to close this request. Thanks everyone! Maury (talk) 18:33, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

OK, thanks for the heads up - I will archive this Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 20:37, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]