Wikipedia:Peer review/Ezra Weston II/archive1

Ezra Weston II edit

Seeking a peer review for this article. I am considering submitting it for GA and would appreciate any suggestions for improvement, corrections, etc. Thanks, Historical Perspective 2 (talk) 13:52, 6 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Tom (LT)

What an interesting and well-written article. As you probably know, good articles are reviewed against six criteria here: WP:GA?. The main issue I can identify in this article is that a number of statements are not verifiable as they lack citations. Once that's addressed I think this article would have no major issues in passing a good article review. --Tom (LT) (talk) 10:29, 15 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

(As a side-note you may want to check out {{sfn}}-style citations, as in Cerebrospinal fluid. --Tom (LT) (talk) 10:29, 15 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks very much for the feedback. I will beef up the citations. And I'm glad you suggested sfn style citations--I've been considering moving over to that style and now I think is the time. Best, Historical Perspective 2 (talk) 11:12, 15 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, I've made those changes. Hoping it's ready for GAN. Thanks again for reviewing. Best, Historical Perspective 2 (talk) 13:51, 16 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]