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Euro gold and silver commemorative coins (Belgium)

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I've listed this article for peer review because, together with other Wikipedians, we are planning to propose it for a featured article. We are also working on a set of articles to cover the vast collection of euro gold and silver commemorative coins of the eurozone. So far this is the result:

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Austria)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Belgium)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Cyprus)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Finland)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (France)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (France): 2002

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (France): 2003

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (France): 2004

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (France): 2005

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (France): 2006

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (France): 2007

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (France): 2008

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Ireland)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Malta)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Slovenia)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Spain)

We are currently ironing the other articles of the set (Belgium was the first one completely finished, Austria and Ireland are almost done), while we are constantly adding information on new issues. We are also searching for information to start the missing articles of the set. They will be so far:

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Germany)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Greece)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Italy)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Luxembourg)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Monaco)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Netherlands)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Portugal)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (San Marino)

Euro gold and silver commemorative coins‎ (Vatican)

We might create a Portal, once we are close to finish all articles.

Thanks, Miguel.mateo (talk) 04:51, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

(Peer review) This article is excellent in both quality and presentation. Great and much appreciated. (peer review) --Buster7 (talk) 10:48, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

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Comments

• Serious lack of references in the descriptions for each coin: for example, No reference provided for "This was the first Belgian euro commemorative coin ever released" - Same throughout article.
• Every single coin has "Designer: ?" This seems very pointless, why not just remove the Designer parameter altogether?
• I would suggest that you submit this to FLC, not FAC (when its ready). It is more of a list than an article with paragraphs and paragraphs of prose.

— Wackymacs (talk ~ edits) 11:40, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Wackymacs, thanks for the review. Answering some of your comments:

It is difficult to put references to "trivia" ("This was the first Belgian euro commemorative coin ever released" it is obvious since the euro was introduced in 2002 and this was the first euro commemorative coin ever mint by the Belgians) but I got your point, explanations like this will make the article by far easy to read. Will also search references to other descriptions.

The "Designers", we are currently looking for the information, we left it blank hoping somebody can comment on it. Other sister articles like Austria, Finland, Slovenia ... that we are currently working on, they all have the designers.

I am currently requesting the opinion of another administrator who made a similar article FA, instead of FL. You might be right about that one.

Thanks again! Miguel.mateo (talk) 14:00, 27 May 2008 (UTC)