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E5 and H5 Series Shinkansen edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm considering making this article a GAN. I've also done some cleanup work following a merge a while back. I think I did a fine job with improving the flow of the article following the merge, but I feel that the lead section needs some work.

Thanks, XtraJovial (talk) 04:14, 11 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

comment: (1) Reference 1, the MLIT press release, is a permanent dead link, and i also couldn't find any archived versions. (2) The E5 series fleet list is sourced to "JR EMU Formations - Winter 2018", a book published in November 2017. Data in the table is from up to September 2021; likely the information was updated, but not the source, so a newer source is needed that can verify the dates. (3) There is a Hitachi-built mock-up E5 series end car on display at the Saitama Railway Museum (coverage at trafficnews and tetsudo.com); could be added to the article. Nyamo Kurosawa (talk) 22:40, 12 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]