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I've listed this article for peer review because I just made some translations from ruwiki. I need a general review regarding the grammar and other issues.

Thanks, Ali-al-Bakuvi (talk) 13:08, 19 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

llywrch writes

I've given the article a copy edit for grammar & fluency; it wasn't that bad before, so I hope my edits improved it. There are a few statements, though, that I expect would be flagged as needing citations. -- llywrch (talk) 16:00, 2 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Dudley Miles

"in USSR was considered a separate language until 1937" - what happened after that?
The census numbers the Digor in hundreds and estimates 52,000 - why the discrepancy (and why does the Digor dialect article say 100,000?
The article is short of references, particularly on the crucial last two sentences of the first paragraph and the first three sentences of History.
An interesting short article but needs more work on clarification and references. Dudley Miles (talk) 10:31, 17 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]