Wikipedia:Peer review/David Portnoy/archive1

David Portnoy edit

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I just want to get some eyes on it.

Thanks, TheWarOfArt (talk) 21:23, 28 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Normally articles are broken into sections to make long stretches of text easier to navigate. This article is so short that the sections are unnecessary—everything could easily be put into a single paragraph (so that the "lead" is the "body"). Curly Turkey (gobble) 23:45, 4 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]