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I've listed this article for peer review because I think the issues pertaining to it's validity have been addressed. Most importantly, citations were included for the content.

Thanks, Jeronimo Jeronimojammies (talk) 03:36, 20 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

This article has multiple still-valid issue tags, still leads like a promotional article on a barely relevant LP, and isn't long enough or well-written enough to really justify a full peer review. My immediate recommendation would be to scrap what's there and rewrite it in more encyclopedic tone from scratch. ResMar 15:13, 21 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]