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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like advice as to how I can improve its general quality, and potentially bringing up its grade sometime in the future.

Thanks, IanTEB (talk) 15:40, 26 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Gameplay

Needs some first wikilinks for the body..
Done
Since you are mentioning other games people will be confused unless you explain how does it play.
Done. Explained that Danganronpa V3 is a visual novel game

Plot

Is there no ending?
Done. Added a paragraph explaining the ending

Development

First time mentioning the companies in the body requires wikilinks.
Done

Reception.

Seems like Famitsu should be in the score box.
Not done. Since that is a review of Danganronpa Decadence, I'm not sure it would be appropriate to have in the review box, since the final score doesn't reflect the Famitsu writers' thoughts on Ultimate Summer Camp as a standalone title.

That's all.Tintor2 (talk) 18:43, 26 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I believe I've addressed every point. Thanks a lot for the review and input! IanTEB (talk) 22:01, 26 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]