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I've listed this article for peer review because…I need feedback on changes since the last peer review and the progress made. Also if it's worth listing for FAC any time soon. I'd appreciate a complete breakdown of pretty much everything in list format, including spelling mistakes, odd sentences, badly worded sections, ways to improve things etc.

Thanks, ツ Jenova 20 ^(email) 15:42, 8 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments some quick overview comments.

~~Seems to be a lot of overlinking in the info box (e.g. litre is linked many times....)~~ Done
~~Infobox - "5-speed Manual transmission" no need for "manual" to be capitalised.~~ Done
~~Ref 12 (used in the lead for "competitors") doesn't seem to mention any of the competitors.~~ Done

Paragraph 1, line 3. Thanks ツ Jenova 20 ^(email) 10:05, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

~~"The company began selling the car" -> "The company began to sell the car..."~~ Done
~~"engine at €12,590" -> "engine, priced at .."~~ Done
What does "44 mpg-imp" mean to a non-expert?

I believe Miles per gallon is wikilinked in the first few instances, and the following imp is for it being an imperial measurement. Is that what you meant? Thanks ツ Jenova 20 ^(email) 15:55, 31 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I would wikilink to Fuel economy in automobiles but there's a convert template in use already there. Thanks ツ Jenova 20 ^(email) 17:04, 31 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

~~Concerned that the "Models" section reads like a brochure for Citroen, e.g. "is consistently the luxury trim for each market".... yuck.~~ Done
Engines table needs work for WP:DASH.
Tables should meet MOS:DTT for accessibility for screen readers.
~~"611 C3 Picassos built between" avoid starting sentences with a number.~~ Done
~~Capitalise "European car of the year" correctly.~~ Done
~~" quality at 3 stars." see WP:MOSNUM, should be "three stars".~~ Done
Worldwide 2011 sales not available?!
Check refs for dead links, I found a few...!

I found 2 from the Department for Transport that are under maintenance. Did you see any others not from this source? Thanks ツ Jenova 20 ^(email) 13:30, 1 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 19:27, 29 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]