Wikipedia:Peer review/Chokamkuru Langneh/archive2

Chokamkuru Langneh edit

Previous peer review

I've listed this article for peer review because I want to nominate this article for Good Article. I am new to this process but because this is a subject I like, I would like to get involved by working on an article I'm interested in. Please review the article and categorize it to a suitable category. The article is about an 21st century Indian singer-songwriter. The article may also be categorized into the articles for Karbi people, musicians from Karbi Anglong.

Thanks, soundchecknortheast

Comments from Richard3120 edit

Please don't be offended, but this needs a LOT more work to reach GA-class. At the moment all the article says is that he is a singer, a list of his records, one line about the musicians that influence him, and a nomination for a non-notable award. There's almost no information about his life, or detail about how his career developed. I think this is much too early to be considering a GA... he's 17 and just starting on a career, and so far he's only released three singles and a mini-album. It also needs more reliable sources - you have included his birth date for example, but that needs to be verified from a reliable source. Compare the article for another Indian singer, Shreya Ghoshal, which is a good article... look at the amount of text and sources that Ghosal's article has, detailing her life and career. That gives you an idea of the level required to reach good article status. Richard3120 (talk) 03:02, 1 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It looks like two PRs were opened for this article, see Wikipedia:Peer review/Chokamkuru Langneh/archive1 for more information. I am closing this PR because there are major cleanup banners at the top of the article. Once these are addressed a new PR can be opened. Z1720 (talk) 15:45, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]