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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to find some ideas to improve the article before going for GA status.

Thanks, Mephiston999 (talk) 14:48, 24 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Brianboulton comments: In its present form the article reads more like a promotional blurb for the college rather than an objective encyclopedia article. There is no history of the school. The main content seems to be nothing but lists of courses, achievements, alumni and associated institutions, with much of the information coming from the school itself. Needs to be re-prepared from the ground up; perhaps a study of some of the school or college articles at WP:GA or WP:FA will help you to develop the article in a more appropriate manner. At present peer review is premature. Brianboulton (talk) 01:05, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tuck School of Business is a Featured Article and would make an excellent model for improving this article. Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 01:19, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]