Wikipedia:Peer review/Brandon Routh/archive1
Brandon Routh edit
Basically as complete as can be at this point in his career. Seems like it could pass GA. Would like to know on how to improve further. I suppose the intro could be expanded, though there isn't much to summarize beyond a point. Mad Jack 07:27, 25 June 2006 (UTC)
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- As this is a biographical article, I suggest adding {{persondata}}. Also, instead of using {{Infobox Biography}}, use {{Infobox actor movie}}; it applies more to him and contains more relevant information. --NMajdan•talk 14:53, 26 June 2006 (UTC)