Wikipedia:Peer review/Book of Abraham/archive1

Book of Abraham edit

I would like to see get this article to Good Article status. There are still some citations that are needed, but comments on the rest of the article are welcome. —Preceding unsigned comment added by RelHistBuff (talk • contribs)

Sorry, yes, it was me who put this article up for peer review. I would welcome strong criticisms, especially noting the weak points. RelHistBuff 08:30, 7 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Andy _t 23:55, 7 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I got rid of some weasel words and redundancies. Any one have specific criticisms that show it does not qualify as a Good Article? RelHistBuff 20:16, 9 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]