Wikipedia:Peer review/Bill Nye/archive1

Bill Nye edit

I've listed this article for peer review because its undergone some extensive edits and I would like some more input to help improve it even more so that it can be soon listed as a Good Article.

Thanks, The lorax (talk) 03:22, 11 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi The lorax. I am not seeing much wrong with this article. Some points from a read through.
  • There is a dubious-discuss tag that needs to be resolved
  • The Following his stint on Almost Live!, from 1991 to 1993, he appeared in the live-action educational segments of Back to the Future: The Animated Series in the nonspeaking role of assistant to Dr. Emmett Brown (played by Christopher Lloyd), in which he would demonstrate science while Lloyd explained sentence could use some better wording and a reference wouldn't hurt.
  • The non-free rational for File:Bill Nye Speed Walker Almost Live 1990.jpg is pretty weak.
  • Too much WP:Proseline in other media appearances
  • Same with awards and honours
  • Some of the referenceing is not that strong. Google patent search, Twitter and youtube are all used and while that might be alright for some information we generally prefer better sources if they exist.
All in all it is not too far away from being of good standard. AIRcorn (talk) 06:57, 5 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]