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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it to a GA. This would be my first GA article but I need to know all of the details that are wrong with it so I can fix them.

Thanks, OLI 05:15, 28 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Again, the entire article needs help and its not even close to GA criteria. Some of the statements were unsourced and this request should be immediately closed. GlatorNator (ᴛ) 16:54, 1 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Elaborate how do I help the article? OLI 05:23, 2 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I have made significant improvements. Could you please provide what needs assistance the most?

OLI 07:25, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720 edit

Thanks for bringing this to PR. I agree that this article is a long way from becoming a GAN. My main issue with this is that it needs more information. Try consulting WP:LIBRARY, Google, archive.org or your local library system for more sources. Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Resources might also help with finding pop culture sources. I also suggest taking a look at Janet(s), a featured article about a television episode, as it can give ideas on how to format the article and what information should be included. Z1720 (talk) 13:43, 5 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720 Thank you for the recomendation. I expanded it I feel as if this is a step in the right direction. Could you provide me what needs the most assistance and what is good and can stay? OLI 05:01, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- The article looks better. Keep expanding with any sources you can find, and when finished I would rewrite the lede to incorporate the new information. Z1720 (talk) 20:09, 9 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]