Wikipedia:Peer review/Australia-Indonesia Prisoner Exchange Agreement/archive1
Article needs a picture of the Indonesian Minister for Law and Human Rights to replace the box with President SBY DavidYork71 11:55, 20 February 2007 (UTC)
Auroranorth
edit- General comments:
- Contains good information
- Suggestions for improvements
- Well referenced, however please include the following after every one: (accessed 2007-02-03), or whatever the date is.
- The external links section has built up in multitude, however an asterisk (*, press Ctrl+8) should be placed before each one.
- Desperately needs expansion!
- The Indonesian and Australian coats of arms do not need to be there. Instead, try a picture of the people involved, such as the Attorney General of Australia, Phillip Ruddock.
- Please put your information into headings.
Auroranorth 10:14, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
AnonEMouse
edit- The article starts by saying there is no such agreement - given that, how about renaming without that last word?
- The references need more than just accessdates, they need publications, publication dates, authors... see {{cite web}} or {{cite news}}
- The article concentrates on Au prisoners in In - how about the other way around? Aren't there any Indonesian nationals held in Australia?
- Similarly, the article concentrates on Australian laws, reports and feelings; what does the Indonesian law, press and public say?
- How does this compare to exchange agreements (or lack thereof) between Au and other countries? Between In and other countries?
--AnonEMouse (squeak) 15:23, 14 March 2007 (UTC)