Wikipedia:Peer review/Aqua Teen Hunger Force/archive1

Aqua Teen Hunger Force edit

Reasons for a peer review:

- This article has a wealth of various information, and has the potential and fanbase to become a featured article

- This is a show on a major cable network, and has a good deal of popularity.

- Illuminator of the Truth 16:55, 21 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Well you could expand the Film section, and add a lot more references. Expand the story so far in the List of Episodes section, and merge all trivia. Wiki-newbie 17:04, 21 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, you need more references. Also, either expand the 'Episodes' and 'The Movie' sections or move the {{main}} links to the 'See Also' section.--NMajdan•talk 20:14, 21 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Everything Master Shake throws seems to explode except for tennis rackets and chainsaws.

I've taken a look at the article. The opening paragraphs are particularly good. I think it's well-written and draws the reader in overall.
I've separated out some paragraphs - you'll notice that by doing that, the article is more approachable and readable. Try to get the paragraphs all roughly the same length, with about 5-7 sentences at most.
You have "orphan" sentences throughout the article (sentences that either need to be built on, or incorporated into a paragraph). Try eliminating these.
This show is in it's 6th season, I believe, and might deserve it's own "Wikiproject" at this stage. Try approaching similar Wikiprojects to get some help with the episode guides. You'll also probably find folks who watch the show in those projects. Try Wikiproject SouthPark and Wikiproject Simpsons. Nina Odell 13:07, 31 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
You're going to need a synopsis of each season in the body of the article. Hope you like ATHF a lot!Nina Odell 13:08, 31 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]