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Ancient House, Ipswich edit

I've added a bit of information to the article recently gleaned from the museum housed there. I'd like to know how and where this article can be improved. Any suggestions are welcome! Cєlαя∂σяє^Talk 00:42, 13 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Some brief notes:

Overall it's pretty brief. Perhaps you could find some more interesting history and give a longer description of the 'ground floor room panelling' and the 'long gallery'? Could you give a more detailed description of the interior of the house? How many square metres is it?
There are no references. Please use inline citations to provide sources for the material.
The History section should be moved before the architecture, as is the convention.
Rather than a dash (-) as a sentence break, please use the mdash character (HTML: —).
'commisioned' appears to be missing an 's', unless that's how its spelled over there.

Thanks. — RJH (talk) 15:54, 15 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Sources:

I've added a reference section and included the images of england website - lot's of juicy information there to include (but don't violate copyright)
The article might benefit from information about the buildings context - eg. the buttermarket area - why was this so called - is it contemporary to ancient house - what was the relationship of the building to it's surroundings over time. etc.
More pictures - it would be great if you could snap the four panels of the pargeting so we can see the tudor view of the world for ourselves.

--Mcginnly | Natter 19:22, 16 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 23:45, 16 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the suggestions so far, have been busy IRL lately, so haven't had the time or energy. Will work on the article more soon. Cheers. Cєlαя∂σяє^Talk 22:19, 21 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]