Alexander Grant edit
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because…
- It needs references
- It needs some cleanup in the middle and end
- It use some information, which I have not been able to find
Thanks, Basketball110 Go Longhorns! 20:34, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
SGGH
I suggest:
- an image!
- as more info arrives, the article will need sections
- As you have already identified, it needs a references section with inline citations, which will need a {reflist} obviously.
- Some of the 1-2 sentence paragraphs can be merged, because they are a little small at the moment
- Is there an article you can redirect the redlinked "Naval superintendent" to?
All in all, its a good start, obviously it needs more information to develop, and being that it is in its infancy at the moment, I don't know if my peer reviewing can tell you more than you clearly already know. SGGH speak! 16:34, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
- Added one reference, more to come. Basketball110 Go Longhorns! 23:28, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
- Woody
I suggest much the same as SGGH. I have given it an edit by adding in some sections that you can use for expansion. I also added in a WP:LEAD. I would concentrate on finding out more about his early life and his family life including who he married and when he died etc. All this information needs to be sourced using inline citations as noted above. If I can help with this, then just ask. Hope this helps and regards. Woody (talk) 17:28, 30 March 2008 (UTC)