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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to get some feedback before nominating this article for WP:GA.

Thanks, Vacant0 (talk) 14:02, 12 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

These comments are after a quick scan of the article:

Each section of Party campaigns should have a paragraph. Perhaps some of these section can be merged together if they are parties with similar ideologies (maybe left/right parties listed together, or parties by region of dominance? Perhaps major party campaigns have their own section, and smaller parties are merged?
"The elections also represented the biggest seat loss in the National Assembly since the 1992 elections, with the SNS-led coalition losing 68 seats." Needs a citation
"Vučić managed to win 60% of the votes in the first round of the presidential election," -> "Vučić won 60% of the votes in the first round of the presidential election," managed to win sounds too much like an opinionated statement, and this suggestion reduces the number of words.

@Vacant0: Hope this helps. I think this is pretty much ready for GAN. Z1720 (talk) 04:03, 29 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Done. Thank you for the peer review. Vacant0 (talk) 10:27, 29 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]