Wikipedia:Peer review/1994 San Marino Grand Prix/archive1

1994 San Marino Grand Prix edit

Any comments greatly appreciated on improvements that could be made to the above 'good article'. Alexj2002 11:58, 12 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

quick observation - the intro discussion of concequences (changes in saftey) don't match the main article text (state funeral, court case, with a little on saftey). The two should be closer. This sentence To add to the confusion, Érik Comas left the pits whilst the circuit was closed under red flag. Marshalls frantically waved him down as he approached the scene of the accident travelling at "pretty much full speed". Eurosport commentator John Watson described this as "the most ridiculous thing I have ever seen at any time in my life". needs explaining for people unfamilia r with the sport. Apart from that there are some areas that seem light to me but I need more time to look at the article (I have to go to work now). I think this would eventually be a great FA, talk about an important race. Sabine's Sunbird talk 17:13, 12 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Great. I think that some more information on how the race actually went would be good. It is true that the racing between Schumacher and Larini pales compared to other events, but for completeness it would be worth having (there is some here). Also much as I hate fair use an image, if one can be found, would be good. I can only find pics of Senna's car after the crash which are of dubious taste, perhaps someone has a F1 magazine from the time. Not essential, and certainly doesn't need lots. Sabine's Sunbird talk 04:44, 14 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]