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Starlight (Muse song) edit

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Result: Delist per comments below - although the criteria have not changed substantially since 2007, the article needs some work. Geometry guy 00:11, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This article was promoted a while back when the criteria was different. My criticisms:

Paragraphs are too short in most places and sentences seem too choppy.
Lead does not really seem up to scratch.
Critical reception could be expanded and tidied more to look like Give Me Your Eyes or Break Your Heart for example.

- Spiderone 12:55, 8 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Further comments

Checklinks Most links seem to be okay apart from the last one.
MuseWiki (#6) seems to be unreliable. Also, MuseLive (#8) is a forum. Spiderone 16:40, 8 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - Still no work done to address issues Spiderone 09:44, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]