Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Affluence in the United States/1

Affluence in the United States edit

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Result: Delisted per points below, an unaddressed {{leadtoolong}} tag in article, and no subsequent effort to try and improve the article Snuggums (talk / edits) 23:35, 9 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

This article was requested for a reassessment. After looking over it, I believe that it fails the Good Article criteria in its current condition. The article is not up to date, as well as it having tags like Citation Needed and Original Research on it. The prose also needs a rewrite. Reading sentences like "While the two paragraphs above only describe the relationship between status and personal income, household income is also often used to infer status." shows that the article fails criterion 1.b. I hope that work can be done to fix this article up. GamerPro64 18:50, 12 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Delist - Agreed on all points. Needs to be revamped. ProKro (talk) 22:32, 23 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]