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The list was promoted by The Rambling Man via FACBot (talk) 11:41:13 22 July 2019 (UTC) [1].

Welsh Premier League Golden Boot edit

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Nominator(s): Kosack (talk) 19:36, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

A bit of a pet project for me in creating a Welsh Premier League list and attempting to take it to FL. The list is for the winners of the Golden Boot, for the top goalscorer each season and I believe it meets the FLC criteria. I look forward to any comments. Kosack (talk) 19:36, 11 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • "before being rebranded as the Welsh Premier League in 2002" - this isn't mentioned (or sourced) in the body of the article
  • "on 6 Janu2 1993" - think something's gone a bit awry there ;-)
  • "Eifion Williams' won the Golden Boot" - stray apostrophe there
  • "Eifion Williams goals-per-game ratio" - ah, this is where that apostrophe was meant to be ;-)
  • "In 2004, the award was won by Andy Moran of Rhyl however, he" - comma should be before "however", not after
  • "Griffiths' last win, during the 2011–12 season remains" - needs a comma after "season"
  • Chris Summers link in the table points to a dab page
  • Think that's it from me. Just little tweaks needed. Shame we don't have pictures of any of the players concerned.... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:36, 12 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: Thanks Chris for your review, I believe I've addressed all of the issues. The lack of images is a shame, I spent sometime trawling through Flickr in the hope of finding something but no luck. Kosack (talk) 10:15, 12 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • I know it's in the infobox and main prose, but it might be nice to indicate the first year of the award in the lead. Something like this addition: "The award was created in 1993 for the inaugural season of the competition..."
  • "outscoring his nearest competitor Andy Cole in the English Premier League by nine goals." Place commas after "competitor" and "League".
  • "The award was subsequently given to the second highest scorer..." Make it "second-highest" with a hyphen.
  • Change the Ref(s) column heading to {{Abbr|Ref(s)|Reference(s)}} (which looks like this: Ref(s) ).
  • According to the "Awards won by club table", the award has been issued 29 times, not the 27 times indicated elsewhere.
  • Refs 2, 4, & 10 (for example) are in sentence case, but refs 3, 5, & 6 (for example) are in title case. Chose one format and apply the same style to each (sentence case seems to be the most prevalent here).
  • Everything else looks fine. NatureBoyMD (talk) 19:44, 12 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@NatureBoyMD: Thanks for your review, I've fixed all of the issues raised above. A quick note to yourself and Chris The Dude, I've managed to secure an image from a Flickr user now in case either of you want to include it in your reviews, cheers. Kosack (talk) 12:29, 13 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Kosack: The above changes look good. Regarding the image, it needs alt text with the |alt= field and a period at the end the full sentence caption. One more thing I noticed, the "Awarded for" description immediately below it does not need a period as it is not a complete sentence. NatureBoyMD (talk) 13:19, 13 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@NatureBoyMD: Fixed those two issues now, cheers. Kosack (talk) 13:46, 13 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Well done. NatureBoyMD (talk) 14:23, 13 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support – Looks good to me. Great job to you! Care to check out my FLC? – zmbro (talk) 21:32, 17 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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