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Timeline of the 2020 Pacific hurricane season edit

Timeline of the 2020 Pacific hurricane season (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 01:21, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

This article contains the timeline of all tropical cyclones during the 2020 Pacific hurricane season. Thank you in advance for your review. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 01:21, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Image review from Kavyansh — Pass edit

Comments from Kavyansh edit

  • "The season officially started on May 15" — What does "officially" mean here? Who determines it?
  • "Accumulated Cyclone Energy" — our article does not capitalize it
  • "Four time zones are utilized in the basin ... and dissipations during the season." — I wonder is this information necessary for the lead? I'll move it to the "Timeline" section instead, just below that graph
  • "35 mph (55 km/h)" v. "111 miles per hour (179 km/h)" — be consistent on whether both units should be in abbreviation or not.
  • "of a kelvin wave" — our article capitalizes 'K'
  • "According to the NHC's protocol" — spell 'NHC'
  • That is it; nice work! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:40, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Kavyansh.Singh, I have addressed your comments. Thanks. :) TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 03:26, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I see that image review comments are not addressed; particularly that does File:2020 Pacific hurricane season summary map.png needs to be updated? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 07:18, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Whoops sorry Kavyansh.Singh, I completely forgot about that part. Added alt text to the season track map. The file itself does not need to be updated at this point--all data is finalized. That notice is just there to encompass the time before seasonal data is finalized (which occurs a few months after the season ends). TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 18:47, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    No issues. Looks good; Supporting! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:49, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "in the Central Pacific—the region between the International Date Line and 140°W, and ended" - the clause starts with a dash but ends with a hyphen
  • "The season officially started on May 15 [....] The season began with the formation of Tropical Depression One-E, which developed on April 25" - do these two sentences not contradict each other......?
  • That's all I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:38, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Hi, ChrisTheDude, I believe I have addressed these comments. Thanks for the review! TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 21:28, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:24, 1 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

CommentsSupport from TRM edit

  • Funny, I would think we could link Pacific Ocean in the lead as that's a principle component of the context of the list.
  • "eastern Pacific Ocean" vs "Eastern Pacific basin" Eastern/eastern? In the latter case, the Eastern, if part of the formal name, really ought to be inside the pipe.
  • It's only just struck me after all these years that it's odd calling it a "hurricane" season when it's all about "tropical cyclones". I think a footnote would be useful explaining that these are (in this case) synonymous, because where I'm from, we have the odd hurricane, but that's never a "tropical cyclone"...
  • "four. Accumulated Cyclone Energy, an index" our article doesn't over-capitalise this.
  • "Baja California Peninsula" our article doesn't capitalise peninsula.
  • "e Madden–Julian Oscillation " likewise "oscillation".

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:52, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the delay, The Rambling Man, I have addressed these comments. Thank you. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 20:43, 1 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
No worries. Support from me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:57, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AK edit

  • Disclaimer: I haven't checked references and will be claiming credit at the Wikicup.
  • Added some links, but I can't find anything else to grouse about, so a support from me. AryKun (talk) 13:15, 27 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Source review – The references used are reliable and well-formatted across the board, and no dead links were detected by the link-checker tool. The source review has been passed. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:12, 4 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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