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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

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Premio Lo Nuestro 2013 edit

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Nominator(s): Javier Espinoza (talk) 18:16, 12 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because we have been working researching the Lo Nuestro Awards history (Erick and yours truly), and for the 2013 ceremony we found the most references (obviously), so we think the list meets the criteria. This list is based on several FLs, mostly the 84th Academy Awards. We will be watching closely this nominations as we did with the Lo Nuestro Award for Pop Album of the Year, the recently FL and the first about this award. Thank you. Javier Espinoza (talk) 18:16, 12 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments from ChrisTheDude
    • "The telecast garnered more than 6.4 million viewers (in North America)" - are the brackets actually needed here?
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "were announced in December 2, 2012" - were announced on, surely?
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "in the morning show ¡Despierta América!" - on/during the morning show, not in
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "the most number of nominations" => "the highest number of nominations" or "the most nominations", each is valid, but the current form isn't
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "against each other in three categories at the Tropical field" => in the Tropical field, not at
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Jenni Rivera being the one of the most awarded performers" - "being one", not "being the one"
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "singer's death in December 9, 2012" - on December 9, not in
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Royce became the nights biggest winner" - need an apostrophe in "night's"
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Royce became the nights biggest winner, receiving six accolades, four in the Tropical Field (Album, Song, Male Artist and Traditional Performance), and for his duet with Mexican band Maná, also earned Collaboration of the Year and Rock/Alternative Song. Maná dominated the Rock Field, receiving Rock/Alternative Album and Rock/Alternative Artist for a total of four." - this is a bit of a mess. It would read better as "Royce became the night's biggest winner, receiving six accolades, four in the Tropical Field (Album, Song, Male Artist and Traditional Performance), and a further two for his duet with Mexican band Maná (Collaboration of the Year and Rock/Alternative Song). Maná dominated the Rock Field, also receiving Rock/Alternative Album and Rock/Alternative Artist for a total of four."
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • the most for any performer in the award show history" => "the most for any performer in the award show's history" or "...the history of the award show"
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "the album reached number-one at the Billboard Top Latin Albums chart" - on the Billboard..... not "at"
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Romeo Santos, and Olga Tañón, were part of the program also" => "Romeo Santos, and Olga Tañón were also part of the program"
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Univision was the second in the ratings at the 18-34 demographic" => "Univision was second in the ratings in the 18-34 demographic"
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "the most socially active program in the network history" => "the most socially active program in the network's history"
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • "language" is spelt wrong in the penultimate sentence
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you so much for your review. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:48, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

CommentsSupport

  • Everywhere in the list you call it the "25th Lo Nuestro Awards", but the article title is at "Premio Lo Nuestro 2013", a term which is never used. Please mention the real name in the lead.
I have been thinking to rename the article as "25th Lo Nuestro Awards", (like the Grammys), but I do not know if that would be ok. Javier Espinoza (talk) 22:38, 24 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I think it would be fine. --PresN 19:57, 26 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "in the ceremony a tribute for her was held" - maybe mention it was a posthumous tribute, and flip it to be "a posthumous tribute for her was held in the ceremony".
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 22:38, 24 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Be consistent if its 3BallMTY or 3Ball MTY.
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 22:38, 24 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "with additional awards for the General Field that includes nominees from all the genres, for the Artist of the Year" - either drop the comma or change the "that includes" to ", which includes"
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 22:38, 24 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • The "show" button for the presenters table is hovering over the image for me; maybe move the image to the right side?
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 22:38, 24 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The broadcast was the second most engaging entertainment show of any language or network" - says who?
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 22:38, 24 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Consider archiving your online references via a site like archive.org or webcitation.org, so that changes/removals of content don't affect your references.
Thanks for the suggestion. Javier Espinoza (talk) 22:38, 24 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your review. Javier Espinoza (talk) 22:38, 24 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Flipped to Support. --PresN 19:57, 26 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]


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