Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of works by Kwee Tek Hoay/archive1

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The list was promoted by Giants2008 10:02, 25 November 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of works by Kwee Tek Hoay edit

Featured list candidates/List of works by Kwee Tek Hoay/archive1

Nominator(s): — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:13, 12 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it is ready. Kwee was one of the most proficient Chinese Indonesian writers, and this bibliography (I believe) does his oeuvre justice. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:13, 12 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Zia Khan 23:54, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments on lede

"...and film reviews[2] as a magazine editor." Ref. should come after full-stop. Same for the rest of the refs.

Not done. This was a deliberate choice as the reference only supports the film reviews and not the whole sentence. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:39, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Link Swastika.

Not done. I have no evidence Swastika is notable as a publisher. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:39, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

translated to English → translated into English

Done (x3). — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:39, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

During the 1920s he wrote ... comma after 1920s

Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:39, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

...first for Sin Po then for Sin Bin. → first for Sin Po and then for Sin Bin.

My grammar check programme is not having an issue with this. Could you point to any pages about grammar which require this?

That was just a suggestion. Zia Khan 23:54, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"He established his first magazine, Panorama, in 1925; he went on to manage four further magazines, including the literary-oriented Moestika Romans and the religious Sam Kauw Gwat Po." Needs inline ref.

It's in the same source and also supported by the table. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:39, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Images need alt text. Dunno why the captions are in this manner (Laozi... and ... Zhuangzi ...)?

ALT texts added. Caption is like that because they are three different images with one sentence holding them together (rather than repeat the same sentence three times). I've seen it in an FA before, though I forget which. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:39, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Zia Khan 21:17, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support – good work. Zia Khan 23:54, 16 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Support - on style and structure. For consistency, shouldn't that be pp. 306–25 where Sidharta's book is sourced under 'Works cited', and not pp. 306–325? Lemonade51 (talk) 22:20, 7 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

You're right. Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:29, 7 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support – Usual solid stuff from Crisco. Just two questions, it maybe all or nothing, but I thought I'd ask anyway:
- Are you using ref 1 and ref 4 to cover for the lack of citation at the end of the first para?
  - Yes. Each citation is for the translation mentioned. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:15, 18 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- ISBN's in "Works cited" don't follow a consistently formatted order, should they? For instance, we have 3-3-3-3-1, 3-3-4-2-1, etc..
  - The ISBNs seem to all be 13 digit, so they are standardised. Nio's book was published in 1962, and I am unaware of any Indonesian books from the time which had ISBNs... the OCLC is given instead, which is necessarily of a different format. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:15, 18 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

--Cassianto ^Talk 21:40, 18 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:16, 18 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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