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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 9 May 2023 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of international goals scored by Olivier Giroud edit

List of international goals scored by Olivier Giroud (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Idiosincrático (talk) 07:22, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I promise this is the last list of goals ahah, they're just so straightforward and systematic, I love it. Oliver Giroud is the top goalscorer for France and is one of the greatest to have played the game. He has scored over 50 goals and is still active at international level, most recently playing in the 2022 FIFA World Cup final. Thank you all in advance for your reviews :) Idiosincrático (talk) 07:22, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments edit

  • Colon in the image caption should be a semi-colon
  • "11th November 2011" => "11 November 2011"
  • "and he has netted twice in a match on ten occasions, excluding his hat-trick" => "and he has netted twice in a match on ten other occasions"
  • "With France, Giroud won the 2018 FIFA World Cup, whilst also reaching" => "With France, Giroud won the 2018 FIFA World Cup, and also reached"
  • "often described as a 'complete striker'." - any reason why this is in single quote marks but the earlier descriptions were in double quote marks?
  • "France manager Didier Deschamps believes" - I would say "France manager Didier Deschamps said in [whenever]", as he won't be France manager for ever
  • "even when Giroud doesn't score" => "even when Giroud does not score"
  • That's it :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:22, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    All addressed, thank you legend @ChrisTheDude. Idiosincrático (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:02, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support -- Phikia (talk) 02:49, 18 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by EnthusiastWorld37 edit

  • Wikilink Thierry Henry
  • Reference 3 "France 1-0 USA" has the incorrect access date and is missing Associated Press in the agency field
  • Reference 4 "France stun Germany 2-1 in friendly" is missing Reuters as the agency
  • Reference 5 "Olivier Giroud scores hat trick as France crush Paraguay 5-0" is missing the Associated Press as the agency
  • "but took six games to do so." - needs a minor rewrite since this text is identical to the ESPN reference that verifies this information
  • "and also reached the 2022 FIFA World Cup final" - needs to be verified with an additional reference since The Athletic does not mention this fact
  • Reference 17 "France beat Denmark on the backs of Alexandre Lacazette and Olivier Giroud"." has the incorrect publication date and is missing the Press Association in the agency field
  • Reference 25 "Italy 1-3 France: Anthony Martial and Olivier Giroud score in French away win" is missing Agence France-Presse in the agency field

That's all I've got for this review EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 17:01, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All done, Cheers @EnthusiastWorld37, Reference 17 (now 18) already had the correct publication date (30 March 2015), but I was close to listing the agency as PA Sport, but I quickly learnt they only changed their name in 2018, after the article was published. Idiosincrático (talk) 17:50, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Must be because I'm located in a much different part of the world that I noticed a publication date discrepancy. Nevertheless I will lend my support for this list to be promoted EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 19:17, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 18:40, 8 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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