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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Matthewedwards 17:47, 13 January 2009 [1].

List of Yozakura Quartet episodes edit

Another episode list. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 19:27, 1 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Support, Finished reading the summaries. Nice work. All the refs are reliable sources, while the summaries are well-written.Tintor2 (talk) 18:56, 4 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 20:36, 4 January 2009 (UTC) [reply]
Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • The episodes of the Yozakura Quartet anime are based on the manga series of the same name by Suzuhito Yasuda. The episodes are directed by Kou Matsuo and produced by the animation studio Nomad." The episodes...The episodes. Can we do away with that repetition?
  • "Singles containing"-->Singles that contain
  • "A DVD compilation, containing the first two episodes of the anime"-->A DVD compilation, which contains the first two episodes of the anime or A DVD compilation that contains the first two episodes of the anime
  • "Rin appears and holds Akina at gunpoint, revealing Kosuke" Insert "that" after "revealing".
  • "Hime meets with Yūhi Shinatsuhiko, a tochigami, concerning Rin" I don't understand, what "[concerns] Rin"?
  • "where all the participants become inebriated on yōkai water, which is alcoholic. "-->where all the participants become inebriated on the alcoholic yōkai water.
  • "but a portal connecting the human world to" That troublesome noun + -ing structure...
  • "Ao and Kotoha take a car and begin to search for the source of the yōkai energy causing the Seven Pillars to grow"-->Ao and Kotoha take a car and begin to search for the source of the yōkai energy that causes the Seven Pillars to grow
  • "Enjin goes to one of the Seven Pillars, and forces it to bloom." Comma not necessary.

Dabomb87 (talk) 19:27, 4 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Think that's it. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 19:57, 4 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 20:36, 4 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • Ref titles (or portions of them) should not be in all caps. Dabomb87 (talk) 19:27, 4 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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