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List of Padma Bhushan award recipients (2010–2019) edit

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Nominator(s): - Vivvt (Talk) 07:02, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Last list under Padma Bhushan recipients category. The list is based on similar current Featured Lists 1954–1959, 1960–1969, 1970–1979, 1980–1989, 1990–1999, and 2000–2009. I am nominating this for featured list because with some inputs from you this can easily become a featured content. Looking forward to some constructive comments. - Vivvt (Talk) 07:02, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Yashthepunisher (talk) 08:51, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Done
  • Period missing from some alt texts.
  • Done
  • At ref 25, Times of India --> The Times of India.
  • Done
  • Ref 44, Indian Express --> The Indian Express.
  • Done
  • Use numbers instead of letters, per MOS:NUM. Like, forty-three should be simply 43.
  • Per MOS:NUMS, Integers greater than nine expressible in one or two words may be expressed either in numerals or in words. Numbers between 21 and 99 are hyphenated. I prefer to use words, just to maintain consistency across all Padma FLs.

Yashthepunisher (talk) 08:12, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Yashthepunisher: I have addressed some of your concerns. Please let me know if you have more. - Vivvt (Talk) 08:35, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Yashthepunisher: Thanks for your comments and support. - Vivvt (Talk) 08:52, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 13:00, 16 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Don't start consecutive sentences with "As of 2018".
  • Done
  • Personal preference, but I usually use † for posthumous awards, rather than hash.
  • I had used dagger template earlier but one of the reviewers mentioned in one of the other Padma FLCs that they had trouble doing "Ctrl+F" with dagger. So changed it altogether. This was the comment --> "Also, instead of using the Template:Dagger, can you insert the symbol "†"? The purpose of having a symbol along with colour coding is that it should help colour-blind people. But the template doesn't allow you to copy the dagger symbol and Ctrl+F it. This direct use of symbol will allow Ctrl+Fing for lazy guys like me." Let me know if that needs to changed.
  • "fields of Neotectonics, Sedimentology, and Environmental geolog..." no need for the capitalisation.
  • Done
  • I'm guessing you based 3/4 of the lead on previously promoted FLs? In which case some attribution (e.g. on the talk page) is needed for GFDL.
  • Done

Otherwise good work. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:37, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: I have addressed some of your concerns. Please let me know if you have more. - Vivvt (Talk) 08:19, 16 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support I'd never thought of issues over ctrl+F for symbols, thanks for the education! My concerns addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:00, 16 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: Thanks for your comments and support. - Vivvt (Talk) 13:09, 16 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support I found it necessary to make one trivial edit, otherwise I've got nothing. Courcelles (talk) 00:40, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Courcelles: Thanks for your changes and support. - Vivvt (Talk) 16:52, 22 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from VedantTalk 18:08, 22 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Vedant
  • "The name of a recipient, whose award have been revoked or restored, both of which require the authority of the President" - have or has?
Done
  • Not sure who "the Ministers" are.
  • It means "the Ministers", the Chief Ministers and the Governors "of State". Linked accordingly.
  • I think the captions should include (awarded in X year) instead to just the year to clarify. Currently, it might be read as the year that the picture was taken in.
Done
  • ""his contacts in the Prime Minister's Office and United States Congress"" - The quotes aren't needed as it's nothing critical.
Done
  • "The Government" - You might want to clarify "The Government of India" as there is a lot of USA in the paragraph. Also, it improves the context of "the country's" in the next sentence.
Done
  • Why mention "PMO" at the second occurrence of the Prime Minister’s Office?
Done
  • "Ronen Sen who was then serving" - comma needed.
Done
  • "had told PMO" - the?
Done
  • I don't know if you could call the J. S. Verma bit a controversy, but I'll leave that to you.
  • Right. Thats why the section title is "Controversies and refusals". Verma's inclusion is under refusals.
  • Oh wow, I completely read over that somehow.

The rest looks good. VedantTalk 03:15, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Numerounovedant: I have addressed most of your concerns. Please let me know if you have more. - Vivvt (Talk) 17:53, 22 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I can support this for promotion on prose standards. Fine work. VedantTalk 18:08, 22 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Numerounovedant: Thanks for your comments and support. - Vivvt (Talk) 18:13, 22 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 20:20, 30 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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