Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of North Carolina hurricanes (1950–1979)
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The list was promoted 20:07, 29 February 2008.
List of North Carolina hurricanes (1950-1979) edit
Self-nom. I published this earlier today, based off of several other featured hurricane lists. Regarding the lack of a top-right aligned image, I requested a track map of hurricanes that affected the state, as used in some other lists. Hope you like it :) ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:19, 18 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Nothing wrong that I can tell. Juliancolton (Talk) 17:50, 18 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- Never dared get involved with these incredibly detailed articles so forgive me if I cross over old ground. Good news is I might see things that other hurricane addicts may have missed! So...
- "during the time period" wouldn't "during that time period" be better?
- "(2008 USD)" in the lead - explain more fully what this means, or reword the damage estimate (maybe link to US $ page).
- "Category 4 hurricane" is in the lead. Needs linking or explanation for non-experts.
- Any reason why you don't use {{convert}} template which gives you free non-breaking spaces and perfect (!) conversion?
- "damage is fairly minor" - tiny bit POV - minor or not minor (unless it's a quote).
- Can the modern estimates of damage be cited (as they seem to be inflated versions of the reported damage at the time)? Or is that covered in each citation?
- "extratropical remnants of" - not clear to non-experts. All subsequent uses seem to be linked.
- "overall damage was limited" - limited to what? (I know, it sounds churlish, but surely all damage that has ever occurred had a limit?)
- Stats section is aesthetically displeasing (to me, at least!). Table needs some work (perhaps just Storms as a heading, centrally aligned, and a footnote to explain what Storms means) and the graph could do with being "thumbed" and captioned accordingly.
- Deadly storms isn't defined (although it's clear to me...) and none of the stats are referenced. Also, direct vs indirect isn't defined either.
- So oppose for now until these are dealt with. All the best. The Rambling Man (talk) 21:18, 18 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- I love a good review from a non-hurricane addict :)
- "during the time period" wouldn't "during that time period" be better? - good idea. I changed "the" to "that", though once the context was established, I left the others as "the".
- (2008 USD) in the lead I changed to in 2008 USD, with a link to USD. Is that good?
- Category 4 hurricane I linked it to a relevant article
- damage is fairly minor - removed fairly
- Can the modern estimates of damage be cited (as they seem to be inflated versions of the reported damage at the time)? - there's never been a problem with the other lists. The tropical cyclone Wikiproject uses this site.
- extratropical remnants of - got it.
- The monthly stats are the tables that are used in every other hurricane list article. I tweaked it a bit, but I would rather the format be uniform among the articles. Also, I explained the difference between direct and indirect deaths. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 22:23, 18 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Hey, thanks for responding and reacting so quickly.
- Still think you should use the {{convert}} template - it provides a wiki-wide consistent approach to units, non-breaking spaces and conversion.
- Just noticed New Holland, North Carolina doesn't have an article - a good opportunity to expand the Wikipedia by creating a stub?!
- Is it just me or is there a dot at the bottom left hand corner of the graph?
- Sort on number of deaths doesn't work correctly. Suggest you have a glimpse at the {{sort}} template which can probably help here!
- That's about it for this round! The Rambling Man (talk) 10:20, 19 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Ah yea, I forgot about the convert template. I got them. I was going to create an article on New Holland, but I added information and redirected it elsewhere (better to have a longer stub than to have two stubs). I found a way to fix the sorting. Yea, I think there's a dot on the bottom-left of the graph, though I have no idea why it's there, nor how to fix it (I admit, I'm not terribly computer savvy). That's it for this round :) ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:37, 19 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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