Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Listen to Me, Girls. I Am Your Father! episodes/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by The Rambling Man 17:27, 31 March 2012 [1].

List of Listen to Me, Girls. I Am Your Father! episodes edit

Featured list candidates/List of Listen to Me, Girls. I Am Your Father! episodes/archive1

Nominator(s): DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 03:09, 21 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list since I think it can meet the requirements. Criticism is also helpful here. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 03:09, 21 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Does the color by the Home Media releases have any meaning? If not, it can probably be removed. --Golbez (talk) 14:05, 21 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'm using it as extra to distinguish the blu ray and DVD tables. If there is strong objections I will remove it. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 00:13, 22 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It seems extraneous, the text should be able to do that and they don't need to be immediately visibly different, but don't change it based solely on me. :) --Golbez (talk) 05:50, 22 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

The article has sentences written in the wrong tense:

The twelfth episode aired on March 27, 2012

I did this one on purpose since it was close enough.

while the first DVD volume was released on April 11, 2012.

Fixed to slated. This was something I forgot.

Episode list table airdate for episode 12 is inconsistent with the Lede (March 28 vs March 27). Which one is correct?

Fixed

Prose needs looking at. Aside from the two, the episodes are also broadcasted on six other stations. is clumsy. How about "The series is also broadcast on six other stations"?

Took your suggestion

Is "station" the normal term for a channel or network in Japan?

To my knowledge it is station.

The list currently fails WP:FL? #3a It comprehensively covers the defined scope, providing at least all of the major items and, where practical, a complete set of items. There is no plot summary for episode 12, because it hasn't aired yet, and episode 13, the one that is exclusive to the DVD/BR release isn't even mentioned. It isn't unpractical to wait until that happens.

Yeah I know this was going to be mentioned. I'll add the summary for the 12th and 13th when it airs but I was hoping other issues would be pointed out before then. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs)

There is no clear mention that the series consists of 13 episodes.

I'll figure out a way on how to make it clearer.

The opening sentence of the article tells us that Listen to me girls, I am your Father is a light novel. It isn't until the second sentence that the reader is told it has been adapted into an anime series. This is backwards, the light novel is not the primary topic here.

Fixed.

Oppose for now until the list can be completed with all the episodes. Matthewedwards : Chat 23:06, 25 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Addressed some issues. I'd like to seek more criticism aside from 3a also. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 04:08, 26 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose – Sorry to do this, but if one of the episodes isn't going to be avaliable for viewing until July, the list is going to fail the comprehensiveness criterion in WP:WIAFL. I suggest withdrawing this FLC and renominating the list later, after the 13th episode is fully covered. Giants2008 (Talk) 02:18, 30 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah but my intention was to resolve other matters and bring this back on July. Well if there are no other issues besides for episode 13 I'll withdrawal this. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 02:20, 30 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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