Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Ghost Stories (anime) episodes/archive1

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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 10:01, 18 October 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Ghost Stories (anime) episodes edit

Featured list candidates/List of Ghost Stories (anime) episodes/archive1

Nominator(s): 五代 (talk) 04:15, 16 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I've reworked the article from an unreferenced "ghosts" list to the current state. I believe it meets the criteria for an FL now, so I am nominating it. Thank you, 五代 (talk) 04:15, 16 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by DragonZero: Sourcing seems reliable. For future reviewers, Web-Japan is backed up by Japanese Ministry of Foreign Affairs so I think that's reliable. I have issues with the article though. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 20:23, 17 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I don't believe the prose is strong enough to meet the criteria. I can't really pinpoint why though.

The prose was copyedited by a member of the GOCE, but if you think it's still not FL level, I'll ask someone else to take a look at it.

~~Only the first two episodes have their airdates sourced.~~

Added sources.

Lead is structured weakly. First paragraph talks about what the series is. Second paragraph covers airdates and release dates. Third paragraph includes Animax's release, the episode that was snubbed in both releases, and theme songs. The third paragraph seems to be jumping around.

I have rearranged the lead and the prose has been slightly copyedited.

Episode 10 has two summaries?

Merged the two summaries.

Currently, I am neutral to this list leaning towards oppose. If other reviewers disagree with what I pointed out, consider my arguments null. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 07:09, 27 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the comments DragonZero. 五代 (talk) 13:06, 19 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It's been too long. You should notify the wikiproject for views. I'll go through the grammar again when I can. You should add in a media release section to expand the broadness in coverage. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 02:15, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, I am thinking of withdrawing this nomination. My exams are coming up, so I think I won't be able to keep an eye on this. I will nominate it later. Thanks DragonZero. ごだい (会話) 04:37, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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