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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 31 December 2020 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Bluey (2018 TV series) episodes edit

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Nominator(s): SatDis (talk) 02:16, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list as the parent article, Bluey (2018 TV series) just became a Featured Article. I believe the quality of the episode list is on par with the show's main page. I am happy to receive any feedback to improve the quality of the episode list before it gets promoted. Thanks. SatDis (talk) 02:16, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@HĐ: @JAYFAX: @TheJoebro64: @Allied45: Hi editors. Thank you for your support in Bluey's FA review. I was wondering if you could please leave some feedback on this episode list, if possible. Many thanks in advance. SatDis (talk) 08:15, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Aoba47 edit

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  • I have a comment about this sentence: Other characters featured each represent a different dog breed. I am uncertain about the "represent" word choice because I thought the characters were just different dog breeds rather than "representing" them. The current word choice just sounds off to me, like how countries are represented in the Olympics or something.
  • Have changed to Other characters featured are each depicted as a different dog breed.
  • I would reword this part, with BBC Studios holding, to avoid the with +ing sentence structure as that is discouraged.
  • Have changed to BBC Studios hold.
  • For this part, its capital city inspires the show's setting, I would say Brisbane directly in the prose. As someone completely unfamiliar with Australia, I honestly did not know Brisbane was the capital of Queensland.
  • Have fixed.
  • The sentence about the episodes' themes should have a citation. In fact, a majority of the lead's first paragraph should be cited as that is information about the show's background, which cannot be cited through the episodes alone.
  • Have added citations to the entire first paragraph.
  • Thank you for doing this. I know it is a pain, but I appreciate it. Aoba47 (talk) 18:19, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • For this part, This includes "Teasing" and "Flat Pack", shouldn't it be These since you are referencing multiple musical scores.
  • Fixed.
  • I would link DVD as I could see one day, readers not being familiar with the concept right away (which makes me feel ancient lol).
  • Haha, that is funny! Linked.
  • In the lead, you say the dad's name (i.e. Bandit), but refer to him as Dad in the episode summaries. Is there any reason for this? I have the same question for the Chili/Mum difference between the lead and episode summaries.
  • I have reworded summaries to include Bandit and Chilli names - something I was planning on doing!
  • I would strongly encourage you to archive the citations if possible to avoid link rot.
  • I had also archived half of the references previously. This is all done now.
  • Done.
  • For this part, puts her in a dog collar to help break, I initially thought you meant a more traditional dog collar. In the US, I've not heard dog collar used in this context. I've mostly heard something like "dog cone", but admittedly I am not a pet owner so I am no expert. Is this phrase ("dog collar") used in this context in Australia? I was just surprised when I pressed the link.
  • This must have been a typo! I'm sure I meant "dog cone".
  • I would link to Terrier in the "Typewriter" episode summary. I would actually encourage to look through all of the episode summaries and link any dog breed on the first mention.
  • Done. Not sure if I've missed any.
  • I did not think so either, but I just wanted to raise this to your attention in case I read over other instances in the episode summaries. Aoba47 (talk) 18:20, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • For "The Pool" episode summary, what do you mean by "the important equipment"?
  • Have changed to important swimming equipment, including pool floats
  • Thank you for the clarification. Aoba47 (talk) 18:20, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • It may be helpful to link yoga ball for the episode of the same name.
  • Done.

I hope these comments are helpful. Congrats on the Bluey FAC. I am glad to see a children's program be a part of a Wikipedia's featured content, particularly non-American ones. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to support this. I would encourage you to keep an eye on this list because it is already quite long and will only get longer as the program continues. If possible, I would greatly appreciate any feedback on my current FAC? It is about a completely different topic (being about music rather than television), but I always appreciate getting an outsider's perspective to insure that the article can be understood by unfamiliar readers. Either way, have a great rest of your weekend! Aoba47 (talk) 21:51, 29 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: Thanks so much for the feedback and leaving a review! I am very passionate about children's programs, especially Australian ones, so I appreciate that comment! I have addressed all of these issues now. I guess I'll consider splitting the list into seasons once it gets longer? Thanks for reading some of the summaries in detail, as well! I will endeavour to leave feedback on your FAC when I get the chance. Thanks again! SatDis (talk) 11:47, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you for addressing everything. I support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 18:28, 1 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from HĐ edit

Support No issues found. The list is meticulously sourced and the lead reads well. A minor comment that would not affect my support however: shouldn't viewer numbers be better off with something like "Australian viewers (in thousand)"? HĐ (talk) 11:19, 6 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Thanks so much @HĐ:. The only reason that suggestion bothers me, is that I'd have to list, for example, 450 instead of 450,000, and it seems a bit more confusing to me. I hope it's fine to leave as is. Thanks. SatDis (talk) 11:41, 6 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Some Dude From North Carolina edit

Comments from MarioSoulTruthFan edit

  • Support Aoba 47 already did a meticulously review on the article and I don't say this very often, but it is flawless. Excellent prose on the lead. Once the third season and others are out you will keep the article updated. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:46, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Source review – Pass edit

Doing now. Aza24 (talk) 23:46, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • So for linking publisher/works you can either link them all, none or the first mentions (consistency is what matters), right now your linking of Australian Broadcasting Corporation doesn't fall into any of these categories since it appears earlier in ref 1
  • Would think you should link The Guardian
  • Thank you for the consistent retrieval dates and archive links!
  • I see no issues in reliabillity
  • I'll preemptively pass for source review as the issues are so minor, do address them though when you get around to it. Aza24 (talk) 00:01, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Aza24: Have addressed the issues above. Thankyou! SatDis (talk) 11:27, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'm a little concerned about promoting an in-progress tv show, but on the other hand it's not like there likely to be massive changes to a young kids' show beyond adding more rows whenever the next season comes out- it's not exactly Game of Thrones. So, closing, promoted. --PresN 01:53, 30 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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