Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Bermuda T20I cricketers/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Crisco 1492 12:14, 14 April 2015 [1].

List of Bermuda T20I cricketers edit

Featured list candidates/List of Bermuda T20I cricketers/archive1

Nominator(s): Black hole78 ^{talk | contrib} 21:58, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it meets FL criteria. The list is formatted according to other Featured Lists of cricketers. The Bermuda ODI list is already a featured list, so for sake of completeness, I want to get this list to Featured Status as well. Since, Bermuda doesn't currently have Twenty20 International status, the information in this list is unlikely to significantly change for the foreseeable future. Black hole78 ^{talk | contrib} 21:58, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comment

I think prose is not as good to meet the FL standards for example the first sentence repeats the same thing (same for the last two sentences). There is no proper use of abbreviations and dashes etc. Take a look at what we have done in List of India Twenty20 International cricketers, List of Sri Lanka Twenty20 International cricketers and List of Pakistan Twenty20 International cricketers for different approaches. --Khadar Khani (talk) 16:44, 8 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- I believe your issues have been fixed. Black hole78 ^{talk | contrib} 00:09, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Harrias

;Comments from Harrias ^talk

Per our other articles of this format, expand T20I to Twenty20 International for the page name.
"2-5 August 2008" should take an endash, not a hyphen.
Add a reference in for Bermuda playing in WCLD4.
Per WP:NUMNOTES, don't start a sentence with a figure. ("14 players...")
The lead is very stilted, the sentences just seem like independent bullet points; try to improve the flow.
When mentioning a person for the second time, there is no need to include their first name. (Romaine, Outerbridge)
Explain what 2/2 means in the lead.
Hodsoll's economy is missing in the table.
Leverock should have "0" in the innings column, not "–".
In the references, be consistent between ESPNcricinfo and ESPNCricinfo. Harrias ^talk 20:59, 16 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

- These are all fixed. Black hole78 ^{talk | contrib} 06:24, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Support, nice work. I've made a minor tweak to the article, but otherwise all good now. Any chance you could take a look at Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of tied Twenty20 Internationals/archive1? Harrias ^talk 13:06, 26 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Support – meets the criteria. --Khadar Khani (talk) 20:32, 20 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 08:24, 6 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments let's get this promoted.

Template needs the link to list to be fixed (to link to List of Bermuda Twenty20 International cricketers).
"This match occurred during" replace "occurred" with "took place" to make it sound more active.
" 2008 ICC World Twenty20 Qualifier" redirects to " 2009 ICC World Twenty20 Qualifier", is it worth rephrasing to say that it was during the qualifier for the 2009 ICC World Twenty20, yet held in 2008?
Stormont is a dab link.
"lost all three" perhaps "lost them all" to avoid repeating three.
"finished 9th" ninth.
"not managed to regain this" just "not regained this"
"There have been 14 players that have" why not just "Fourteen players have..."?
"of which eight players have played" -> "of whom eight have played"
I would say "not out" rather than use the asterisk and piped link.
"and had one dismissal," do you "have" a dismissal or do you "make" one?
Gary Wilson is a dab page.
"having taken 5" five.
You could link Bowling analysis to the 2/2 discussion.
I don't think you need the final sentence in its current form, you've already said Bermuda have lost all three matches, maybe just merge the number of appearances as captain into the previous sentence.
T20I Captains: why is Captains capitalised in the heading and the table?

The Rambling Man (talk) 11:56, 4 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

- Everything's fixed. Thanks for your comments. Black hole78 ^{talk | contrib} 06:23, 6 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Support now my concerns have been suitably addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:24, 6 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Support - SchroCat (talk) 07:59, 6 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Image needs an alt-text. Otherwise, a good list and has my Support —Vensatry _(ping) 11:28, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:07, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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