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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:30, 15 May 2018 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Kollegah discography edit

Kollegah discography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Lee (talk) 12:49, 22 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this discography that I completely revised, expanded, and neatened up. I used the Kanye West albums discography and Rihanna discography as inspiration. I hope it meats the FL requirements. Lee (talk) 12:49, 22 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 19:04, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "five EPs" don't use the abbreviation without having the expanded version.  Done
  • " 38 Singles" no need for capital S and don't mix number formats in a single sentence for comparable items, per MOS:NUM.  Done
  • You link one album title but not the next, be consistent.  Done
  • "for the first time on number 48 on the" -> "and at number 48 on the".  Done
  • "peaked on number " at  Done
  • "Kollegah's third studio" presumably you mean his third solo studio album given this is the fourth studio album noted so far in the lead?  Done
  • "collaborated with German rapper Farid Bang" you've already mentioned (and linked) Bang, his nationality and his career choice.  Done
  • "two gold certifications; including a gold certification from the BVMI and one from the IFPI Austria"-> link certifications appropriately, and rephrase"two gold certifications: one from BVMI and one from IFPI Austria."  Done
  • " most-soled album to date" -> "best-selling"  Done
  • "In 2015, Kollegah released his fourth studio album Zuhältertape Volume 4" he's already released his fourth by this time...  Done
  • "second consecutive number one release ", "third consecutive number one release ", "fourth consecutive number one release " repetitive prose.  Done
  • " It's supported by three singles" avoid contractions, and this reads odd anyway, something like "It spawned three singles" or "Three singles were released from the album..."  Done
  • "certificate 8 days before it initial " -> "eight" and "its".  Done
  • Which territory does each release date relate to?
  • "Put on the Index in June 2012.[10]" no full stop required.  Done
  • Don't overlink Bang in the tables.  Done
  • Mixtapes, EPs, samplers etc not mentioned in the lead at all.
  • You need the – footer at the bottom of each table, not just the albums section tables.  Done
  • No ref for "Ich Represente".  Done
  • No ref for "Business Waffendeals"  Done
  • Music videos as featured artist section is missing references.  Done
  • Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles.  Done
  • Avoid spaced hyphens, use spaced en-dashes instead per MOS:DASH.  Done
  • Consistent date formats in the references please.  Done

The Rambling Man (talk) 12:08, 6 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed the grammar mistakes and added references. I changed "-" to "–" and removed the uppercase titles. Removed unnecessary full stops. All date formats are consistent now (maybe I missed one) Physically all of his albums were released in Germany, Austria, and Switzerland on the same day.--Lirim.Z (talk) 13:51, 6 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Is where really the need to put all the eps and mixtapes in the lead? They didn't chart and are not really important for his discography.--Lirim.Z (talk) 17:10, 6 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 22:33, 2 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Comments –
  • In the first sentence, the first word of "Extended play" shouldn't be capitalized.  Done
  • BVMI should be spelled out in its first usage, with the abbreviated version in parentheses afterward. I don't think many non-Germans will know what that stands for off the top of their heads.  Done
  • In the last sentence of the lead, was the capitalization of "Jung, Brutal, Gutaussehend" meant to be different than what appears earlier? The others aren't capitalized after the first word.  Done
  • Note a needs a period at the end.  Done
  • Reference 1 needs an access date.  Done
  • The all caps in references 1, 22, 50, 51, 52, 57, 69, 79, 89, 94, 99, 100, 101, 107, 109, 110, and 113 should be removed.  Done
  • Hyphens in the titles of refs 1, 5, and 6 should be converted into en dashes.  Done Giants2008 (Talk) 21:18, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support – All of my concerns have been addressed adequately and I think this meets FL standards. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:33, 2 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you.--Lirim | T 18:24, 7 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Courcelles (talk) 18:23, 7 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
*"Kollegah has sold more than 837,500 records." Source?
  • "The critically acclaimed album" I see the sources for the certifications, but not for calling it "critically acclaimed"
  • All the German sources need to have the "language=German" parameter added to their citation templates.

Otherwise, looks fine. Courcelles (talk) 16:06, 7 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: "Kollegah has sold more than 837,500 records." is based on Music recording certification. So if i change the sentence to "Kollegah was awarded for sales of 837,500 records", would this be ok? If I use this source for "critically acclaimed", is this enough as one example? I'll add "language=German" to all the sources. Thank you for the comments.--Lirim | T 17:27, 7 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
My German sucks, but I think that would be acceptable, though two or three are always better for things like critically acclaimed. Courcelles (talk) 17:34, 7 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Courcelles: So I added 2 sources, added "language=German" and changed the one sentence to "Kollegah was awarded for sales of 837,500 records in both Germany and Austria.".--Lirim | T 17:56, 7 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you.--Lirim | T 18:24, 7 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Scanning through- no ref for Golden Era Tourtape, "Straße 2"; several references use "Applemusic", rather than "Apple Music" like the others; many references use "YouTube" as a work/publisher, which is incorrect- YouTube is the site it's published on, but should be used as "via=YouTube" with the actual publisher in the "Publisher" field (for example, "Majoe feat. Kollegah & Farid Bang ► BADT ◄" is by Banger Musik), as YouTube itself had no hand in putting the video on the site, writing the description, owns the rights to the video itself, etc. --PresN 19:27, 14 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@PresN: I added two sources and corrected your concerns.--Lirim | T 20:10, 14 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 20:21, 14 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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