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Karisma Kapoor filmography edit

Featured list candidates/Karisma Kapoor filmography/archive1

Nominator(s): 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 13:50, 31 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Karishma Kapoor is one of the most famous and widely known actress of Hindi Cinema. Recently, have added refs, re-wrote lead and tried to add all necessary things required to be a FL. All comments welcome. Thank you. 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 13:50, 31 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

Tables need captions ("|+ <caption_text>" above the column header lines, or "|+ {{sronly|<caption_text>}}" if that text would duplicate a nearby section header). Table captions allow screen reader software to jump straight to named tables, without having to read all prior text to provide context. --Pres N 15:15, 31 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Added @PresN: Check now please--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 05:53, 1 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ~ HAL333 19:55, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

====Comments from HAL====

I would place the scope on the film title rather than the year.
- Added--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:54, 5 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Many of her roles are not correctly sorted by surname.
- Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:54, 5 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Just got interrupted... I'll get to the lead soon. ~ HAL333 22:33, 4 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

appearing in the commercially successful films --> "appearing in these commercially successful films"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
playing smaller parts of the love-interests in male-dominated films --> "playing smaller love-interest roles in male-dominated films"
Comma needed after "The film earned her praise from critics"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
several of the years --> "several of the year's"
- I have re-written entire sentence
The above sentence also does not make sense. Hero No.1 is from 1997.
she portrayed the real life actress Zubeida Begum --> "she portrayed actress Zubeida Begum"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Change "Though" to "However"

--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"thriller Bodyguard, which ranks among the highest-grossing Bollywood films of all time." needs a source.
- Done Meanwhile changed the sentence. Let me know if it's framed correctly.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Does Note a have a source?
- Added--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's all for now. ~ HAL333 16:44, 12 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @HAL333:, please have a look at the list and let me know if there are issues to resolve.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 05:05, 23 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @HAL333:, Can you please close the suggestions that I fixed already?. It will help me to identify the unsolved one very easily.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 19:08, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support Terribly sorry for the delay. ~ HAL333 19:55, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"Kapoor had her first commercial success in a leading role in romantic action drama Anari (1993). Anari was a commercial success and was one of the highest grossing films of 1993" => "Kapoor had her first commercial success in a leading role in romantic action drama Anari (1993), which was a commercial success and was one of the highest grossing films of 1993"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Also, what's the source for that last bit?
- Added--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:07, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"From 1992–1996; she featured in" - no reason for that semi-colon to be there
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"The success of the these films" => "The success of these films"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"in the Yash Raj's produced musical romance" => "in the Yash Raj-produced musical romance"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Subsequently, she played leading roles in several blockbuster films, including the comedies Hero No.1 (1997)" - you already mentioned that film. The chronological order has gone a bit weird here.........
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"acclaimed performance of a disillusioned sister of Hrithik Roshan's character in the terror drama Fiza (2000), won" - no reason for the comma before "won"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"took sabbatical from films" => "took a sabbatical from films"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"during the time" => "during this time"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Within the first day of its release, it went on to become" => "Within the first day of its release, it became"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"the film and her performance received mixed reviews" - that bit should be a separate sentence
- Check now--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"she again took sabbatical from films" => "she again took a sabbatical from films"
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
That's what I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:51, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:42, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Source review – Pass edit

Source review from Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:41, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

;Source review

Version reviewed – this – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:09, 17 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Formatting

Ref#3 – Add March 1, 2020 as date
- Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 05:56, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Be consistent with linking Website/News/Institute/etc. in citations. Few, like British Board of Film Classification (Ref#33), Firstpost (Ref#43) are linked, rest are not.
- Fixed I prefere linking--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 16:39, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - Still some Websites like "The Times of India", "The Indian Express" and "The Free Press Journal" are un-linked. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:25, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    - Fixed My apologies. @Kavyansh.Singh: Please have a look now.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 06:29, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Be consistent with 'Rediff' or 'Rediff.com'
- Fixed 'Rediff.com'--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 16:39, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - Also change "Times of India" to "The Times of India", and remove "The Times Group" as the agency. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:25, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ref#83 is just a link. Format it as a citation
- Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 16:39, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Please check Ref#89. It reads 'DelhiJuly 4, India Today Web Desk New; July 4, 2019UPDATED; Ist, 2019 11:33'
- Fixed Replaced with new one. No idea who had added it.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 16:39, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reliability

Seems fine to me. No major issues.

Verifiability

Few links are dead, like British Film Institute (Ref#20), NDTV (Ref#50), etc. I'll suggest to archive all the citations. You can use this tool (Check the box saying 'Add archives to all non-dead references')
- Fixed Archivied--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 16:39, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Afterwards, try running the Citation bot – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:09, 17 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 16:39, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - Hi @Kavyansh.Singh: please check now.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 16:39, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    - @25 Cents FC – just a few more things needs to be addressed. Rest, most seems fine. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:25, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@25 Cents FC – I fixed a few more things, and everything seems fine now. Pass for source review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:41, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks mate, appreciate.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 15:46, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Image review – Pass edit

The only image File:KarismaKapoor05.jpg – is licensed under CC attr 3.0, and is confirmed in an OTRS ticket. Pass for image licencing. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:46, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Kavyansh.Singh Can you please close the suggestions that I fixed already?. It will help me to identify the unsolved one very easily.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 19:10, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from TRM edit

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:01, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

*"work in Hindi films" why obfuscate Bollywood? More readers will be familiar with Bollywood than "Hindi films".

Bollywood films have English-language films as well like Delhi Belly, Finding Fanny etc. She has not acted any such films hence Hindi films.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:31, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"success in a ... a moderate success" success ... success....

Not getting.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"of 1993.[3] From 1992–1996" repetitive year usage.
From 1992–1996 -> surely "between"?

Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Despite appearing in these commercially..." this sentence appears to be unreferenced and honestly doesn't really make sense to me.

Fixed I was not in favour of this sentence either. Since it was added by someone, I did not care to remove.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Kapoor's career prospects improved" according to whom?

I have used this based on Box office collection and awards and nomination received by Kapoor, for mentioned films.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 05:05, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"of ₹763.4 million" link rupee. And translate to something that the majority of our readers can understand, e.g. US$ or £ or Euro.

Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"drama Raja Hindustani. With worldwide earnings of ₹763.4 million, Raja Hindustani emerged" no need to repeat the name of the movie.

Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Our article at Dil To Pagal Hai has no h in Toh.

Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Later in 2002, she" last year mentioned was 2001?

Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"sabbatical from films" from the film industry.

Fixed

"records upon its release. Within the first day of its release" repetitive.

Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 05:03, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"opening day grosser as well as the biggest grosser ever for a single day" likewise.

DoneMy fault, I wrote the whole sentence.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 05:03, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"She made her comeback to films" her acting comeback

Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

" Dangerous Ishq" appears to be Ishhq.

Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"(2012)–in which" no need for en-dash, just space is fine.

Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"belonging to four different centuries" do you mean living in four different centuries?

Fixed My apologies, Kapoor's character in the film is related to past lives not centuries.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:56, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"proved to be a commercial failure earning Kapoor appreciation" perhaps "... failure yet earned Kapoor..."

Fixed--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:56, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"she again took a sabbatical from films" from the film industry. Or maybe "from acting"?

Actually films, because in 2020 she appeared in a web series.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Although, the list mentions a 2018 appearance...

Done Special appearances as herself, Kapoor didn't act in those movies --25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:56, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Tables are sortable so everything that's linked should be linked every time.

Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:56, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The web series isn't mentioned in the lead.

Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 04:36, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's my first pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:59, 25 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have tried to resolv concerned raised by editors. Please let me know if everyone's issues addresed. Delay in promotion not letting me nominate other list. Thank you.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ^🍁 17:26, 15 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support this nom. Yashthepunisher (talk) 07:44, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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