Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Jimmy V Award/archive1

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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 23:32, 8 February 2018 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Jimmy V Award edit

Featured list candidates/Jimmy V Award/archive1

Nominator(s): MWright96 (talk) 12:55, 20 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Having enjoyed reviewing the Laureus World Sports Awards lists, I have to have a crack at re-working one myself. This list is short and neat. It is about those brave individuals in the world of sports who have been presented with the Jimmy V Award, named after college basketball coach Jim Valvano, for overcoming "great obstacles through perseverance and determination." Unless reviewers think otherwise, I believe this list meets the necessary guidelines. All comments and suggestions on improving the list are very much welcome, and will be tended to as soon as possible. MWright96 (talk) 12:55, 20 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Ianblair23 (talk) 08:40, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

:Hi MWright96, great work! Please find my comments below:

Infobox

link Microsoft Theater and Los Angeles

Done. MWright96 (talk) 08:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Table

Change header to Ref, as there is only one ref per row

Done. MWright96 (talk) 08:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

2011 – 125 kg (276 lb) category correct to 125 lb category

Done. MWright96 (talk) 08:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

2012 – Basketball player who change to football player and add that he playing for Rutgers when he got injured

Corrected. MWright96 (talk) 08:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References

Ref 3 – add first = Christian last = Avard

Added. MWright96 (talk) 08:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 6 – date should be July 14, 2016

Corrected. MWright96 (talk) 08:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 10 – link InfoTrac, change page = D3

Fixed. MWright96 (talk) 08:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Navbox

Add Jarrius Robertson to the Jimmy V Perseverance Award winners as the 2017 winner

Done. MWright96 (talk) 08:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 05:55, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Ianblair23 Thanks for the review. I believe all your concerns have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 08:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Support – Great work MWright96, would love to see the rest of the series taken though FLC and made a featured topic. Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 08:44, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Courcelles (talk) 19:49, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

*Infobox and prose contradict each other. One says presented by ESPN, one by the Jimmy V Foundation.

- Corrected. MWright96 (talk) 19:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"and breathe without needing a ventilator." Something doesn't read right about this.
- Have made the necessary adjustments of the prose. 19:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
  - This is what I think was needed, revert if you disagree. Courcelles (talk) 19:25, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    - All fine with me. MWright96 (talk) 19:38, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Sourcing looks solid, good work. Courcelles (talk) 18:37, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- @Courcelles: Thanks for taking a look. I think that is the necessary changes done. MWright96 (talk) 19:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Support I think there are a few of us looking at ESPY articles, so this might turn into something. Courcelles (talk) 19:49, 21 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Indeed.... Perhaps I'll sandbox a "project" page for us... The Rambling Man (talk) 13:08, 26 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 14:31, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Alt name for award isn't explicitly referenced.
- Done MWright96 (talk) 21:13, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Any chance of a fair use image of the award being uploaded and added to the article?
- Fair use picture has been added. MWright96 (talk) 21:13, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"successfully coached the" maybe "led" to avoid the repeat of "coach".
- Done. MWright96 (talk) 21:13, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
" the Sweet 16" I don't have a clue what this means.
- Added what it means. MWright96 (talk) 21:13, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. Go Team ESPY Awards Featured Topic (Perhaps) Crew! (usual disclaimer applies....) The Rambling Man (talk) 20:20, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thank you. I think that is all your concerns addressed. MWright96 (talk) 21:13, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Support my concerns addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:31, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --Pres N 20:28, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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