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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted 15:43, 23 April 2008.

Green Wing (series 2) edit

Having successfully promoted Green Wing (series 1) to featured list, I am trying to do the same with the second series. I have followed the same prinicples as I did with the previous list and I believe that this list is now of the same quality. ISD (talk) 11:21, 26 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
  • Sally Phillips has two l's in her surname.
  • " in the episodes that he appears in" - "in the episodes in which he appears"
  • "Other than Harley, other Green Wing writers make cameos. These include Fay Rusling and Oriane Messina.[10]" merge... "..make cameos, including..."
  • "was received less well " clumsy...
  • "one- off" rogue space.
  • "who steals some of Mac's semen and makes herself pregent." typo and exactly how did this occur?!
  • " so he tries to trick her " -who, Guy or Alan?
  • "while still trying to convince Joanna that he is having it. " reads strangely to me.
  • "and make her fly" what does this mean?
  • " takes the tape of Sue" off Sue?
  • " aSwiss Army Knife" space required.
  • "of what he thinks is her favourite thing." what was it actually?
  • " trains station" singular train.

That's it from me. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:44, 28 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

    • Response to comments - I've carried out the changes you've asked for. ISD (talk) 15:34, 28 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Can the stubby sentences "The second series was considered worse than the first by critics." and "The second series was considered worse than series one." be expanded?
  • "Amongst" sounds archaic compared to "Among"
  • Cathy Prior's review relates only to the first episode, not the series
  • Add a wikilink to Dada

-- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 17:00, 28 March, 2008

    • Response to comments - I have carried the changes that you asked for. ISD (talk) 18:05, 28 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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