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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by The Rambling Man 12:08, 29 August 2009 [1].

CMLL World Women's Championship edit

Nominator(s):  MPJ-DK  (No Drama) Talk  12:02, 14 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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We've had men, little men, duos and trios and now it's time for the Women. I am nominating this list for FLc because I believe it fulfills the criterias including the blue links (which it did not fullfill a week ago).  MPJ-DK  (No Drama) Talk  12:02, 14 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Note FLC is currently short of reviewers; please consider reviewing one or more on the nomination list if you have not already (this message is being posted to all running FLCs). Dabomb87 (talk) 23:20, 14 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Will
  • Support: All seems fine.--WillC 14:28, 15 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resloved comments from Will
  • "The CMLL World Women's Championship (Campeonato Mundial Feminil de CMLL in Spanish) is the top professional wrestling championship for female wrestlers, promoted by the Mexican professional wrestling promotion Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (CMLL)." → "The CMLL World Women's Championship (Campeonato Mundial Feminil de CMLL in Spanish) is the top female professional wrestling championship promoted by the Mexican lucha libre promotion Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (CMLL)."
  • "Bull Nakano was the first CMLL World Women's Championship, winning a 12-women battle royal to win the title on June 12, 1992" So she was a "championship"? Wow just like Scott Steiner wanted to be the next World Heavyweight "Championship". Change to "Bull Nakano was the first CMLL World Women's Champion, after she won a 12-women battle royal on June 12, 1992"
  • "she's the 12th overall champion and the 10th person to hold the championship La Amapola is the second longest reigning champion with 638 days, only Reina Jubuki has held the title for a longer period of tile, 828 days." → "she's the 12th overall champion and the 10th person to hold the championship. Amapola holds the record for second longest reign with 638 days, while the longest is held by Reina Jubuki, at 828 days."
  • "Lady Apache has the most reigns of any wrestler, with three; she also has had the shortest title reign, at 90 days."
  • I would prefer if the notes were complete sentences to flow better and make more sense.--WillC 03:16, 15 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Several typos need fixing, including two full stops at the end of the lead, "Lady Apached" in one of the notes, "La Diabloica" in one of the footnotes, and "unknow" in the other one. Also the lead uses "she's", which is a bit informal and unencyclopedic...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:00, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Okay the typos are highly embarrasing. But what's wrong with "she's" when I've just mentioned her by name in the same sentence?  MPJ-DK  (No Drama) Talk  17:35, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • It is too conversational, "she is" should be used instead -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:26, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support assuming the one remaining typo ("La Diabólcia" in footnote 2) is fixed -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:53, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fixed

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 21:55, 22 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)
Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
  • "The championship has been in existence since 1992 and is one of two Women's championships currently recognized by CMLL" "has been in existence"-->has existed since. Also, why is "Women's" capitalized?
  • "the other being the " "being"-->is
  • "La Amapola is the current CMLL World Women's Champion" Comma after here.
  • "second longest reign"-->second-longest reign
  • "had the shortest title reign, at 90 days.." Double period.
  • IMO, "Vacated" should sort after Mariko Yoshida.
  • Why does "N/A" come up on top when sorting some columns?
  • "The championship was vacated due to inactivity in CMLL's women's division" Needs a period at the end.
  • Why is the current champion not highlighted in the "Reigns by combined length" table? Dabomb87 (talk) 16:31, 19 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 21:55, 22 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • Ref 5, the en dash code is broken.
  • Ref 6 has something screwy with the date parameter. Dabomb87 (talk) 16:31, 19 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]


Comment Support – "12-women" → "12-woman"? I'm pretty sure 12-man would be correct for the opposite gender, and this is the type of usage in the notes. That's the only negative that stuck out to me. Giants2008 (17–14) 03:34, 21 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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