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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 15 May 2023 (UTC) [1].[reply]

2022 Winter Olympics medal table edit

2022 Winter Olympics medal table (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Birdienest81talk 20:25, 27 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because after promoting the 2012 and 2020 Summer Olympic medal tables to said status and saving the 1984 Summer edition's table from demotion, I thought I would do another nomination for another Olympic edition that I mildly liked. I followed how the other ones I promoted/saved in improving this list. I will take any constructive comments in improving it. Birdienest81talk 20:25, 27 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • Given that we have images of medal winners (including one of the athlete who won most golds) and that the specific topic of the article is medal winners, I would include that image in the infobox rather than a boring photo of a stadium
  • "during 2010 winter edition" => "during the 2010 winter edition"
  • "By default, the table is ordered by the number of gold medals the athletes from a nation have won" => "By default, the table is ordered by the number of gold medals the athletes from a nation won"
  • "Two bronze medals were awarded Daniela Maier and Fanny Smith for a third-place tie freestyle women's ski cross event" => "Two bronze medals were awarded to Daniela Maier and Fanny Smith for a third-place tie in the freestyle women's ski cross event"
  • Think that's it -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:32, 28 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • @ChrisTheDude: Done - I have made the necessary adjustments based on your comments. Thank you.
--Birdienest81talk 04:50, 29 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Dank edit

  • Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
  • "Biathletes Johannes Thingnes Bø, Quentin Fillon Maillet, and Marte Olsbu Røiseland, and cross-country skier Alexander Bolshunov won the most total medals at the games with five each.": The writing is good, so I'm reduced to talking about commas (which I don't enjoy doing). "and cross-country skier Alexander Bolshunov" requires either a comma before and after, or neither. A third option is: "Cross-country skier Alexander Bolshunov and biathletes Johannes Thingnes Bø, Quentin Fillon Maillet, and Marte Olsbu Røiseland won the most total medals ...".
  • Checking the FLC criteria:
  • 1. I've done a little copyediting; feel free to revert or discuss. I checked sorting on all sortable columns and sampled the links in the table.
  • 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
  • 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
  • 3b. The list is well-sourced to reliable sources, and the UPSD tool isn't indicating any actual problems (but this isn't a source review). All relevant retrieval dates are present.
  • 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
  • 4. It is navigable.
  • 5. It meets style requirements. At a glance, the three images seem fine.
  • 6. It is stable.
  • Close enough for a support. Well done. Please consider reviewing List of early-diverging flowering plant families or List of basal superasterid families. - Dank (push to talk) 15:27, 29 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Quick comment – Not a full review from me, but I just took a quick glance at it and saw that reference 11 needs a publisher. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:17, 6 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
--Birdienest81talk 18:33, 12 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Just reference 3 needs to be archived like the rest. Idiosincrático (talk) 01:45, 27 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Birdienest81. (I see you're busy with other stuff, I just wanted to make sure you didn't miss this review.) - Dank (push to talk) 14:16, 1 May 2023 (UTC) My mistake. - Dank (push to talk) 17:33, 1 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Source review – Pass edit

Formatting
  • Missing full author's name in ref 8
  • Forgot "G" in title for ref 9
  • I would just link NBC sports every time
  • Could consider adding Agence France-Presse as the author in ref 7
Reliability
  • No issues
Verifiability
  • @Aza24: Done - I have addressed all your comments and made the necessary corrections based off of them.
--Birdienest81talk 07:02, 8 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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