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Vegetarianism of Adolf Hitler edit

Even monsters have to eat...and der Führer could be very picky on the matter of food. Here is a very well writ, well referenced, comprehensive and illustrated piece on history's most notorious vegitarians. I truly enjoyed this article, and believe it fits the bill of fare for an FAC,--R.D.H. (Ghost In The Machine) 23:42, 4 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

  • The lead is far too short, it has a trivia section, and it should probably talk about those crazy proscriptions for his stomach troubles that Hitler's doctors had him on. Raul654 23:48, 4 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • The lead can be expanded for the mainpage. It seems to mention quite a bit about Hitler's digestive drug cocktail. Though there, we would be in some danger of wandering off topic into the realm of "High Hitler";>, which is another article unto itself--R.D.H. (Ghost In The Machine) 23:59, 4 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Object Lead is too short, it does not summarize the article. The image with Bormann's children has an obsolete tag, it needs to be fixed; and you may want to review the tags on the other images.Rlevse 02:12, 5 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Object strenuously. That's some really badly structured interesting material. The article consists of one section, all in choppy little paragraphs, plus a two-line lead. Oh, well, plus a trivia section, but that should obviously be got rid of. No trivia sections. I remind the nominator that a FAC is supposed to meet the Featured article criteria when it's nominated, not have them stuck on when it's about to hit the main page. Bishonen | talk 02:23, 5 September 2006 (UTC).[reply]