Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Ivan Alexander of Bulgaria/archive1

Ivan Alexander of Bulgaria edit

I have followed the article's development for quite some time now and I believe it meets the featured article criteria. It has had a peer review that has now been archived. Todor →Bozhinov 11:33, 10 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Object. The sectioning is bizarre. — Ravikiran 09:12, 11 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Object per Ravikiran. It's a nice article but I have to oppose. Anonymous _anonymous_Have a Nice Day 11:55, 11 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Could you please be more specific? What is exactly the problem with the sectioning? Could you give any suggestions as to how it can be improved? Thanks in advance! Todor →Bozhinov 10:39, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Basically, you have put pretty much the entire article into various subsections of section 1 and you have a section 2 for "Family". It just seems weird. The subsections should be sections. — Ravikiran 10:07, 13 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

That is not the only problem with the article. It is not comprehensive enough. It does not educate someone like me, who knows nothing about his story. For example, right in the first paragraph of "Early rule", we have "This defeat precipitated a succession crisis exacerbated by foreign invasion." Which invasion? I guess it is the Serbian invasion, but in the second paragraph it talks of Bulgaria's "recent losses to the Byzantine Empire." Where did that come from? Also, in the first paragraph, we have "After the conspiracy that drove..." What conspiracy? More details please! The "flow" does not seem right. — Ravikiran 10:07, 13 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]