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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted 03:01, 26 November 2007.

Hybrid Theory edit

I'm nominating this article for featured article because it's gone through some huge improvements contributed by me and SouperAwesome. I recently put for peer review here. I think it passes all the FA criteria. But I think desperately, that it is in need of a thorough copy editing. So, tell me what you think. Thanks! (SUDUSER)85 06:51, 16 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support As nominator (SUDUSER)85 06:44, 17 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose I agree, the article needs copy-editing. Desperately. --Kaypoh (talk) 12:50, 18 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose Suffers from POV -
  • "proved to be a commercial success"
    •  Done changed it to "was a commercial success". (SUDUSER)85 18:17, 19 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Critically acclaimed internationally" - yet we have critics panning it in the reception section?
    •  Done rephrased sentence to "...peaking at #2 in the U.S. Billboard 200, as well as reaching high positions in charts worldwide, despite receiving mixed reviews from publications." (SUDUSER)85 18:17, 19 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Four hit singles were released" i listened to this band back in 2001 and the only 'hit' was "In the End"
  • "The success of the album made it a bestseller during the time of its release" you already told us it was the best selling debut album
  • years alone such as 1996 should be delinked
    •  Done all standalone years have been delinked. (SUDUSER)85 18:17, 19 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • He then sent the tapes back to Blue by FedEx[6] Blue was impressed - missing fullstop?
  • the band renamed themselves as Hybrid Theory after Bennington was included, - in the line-up?
    •  Done rephrased to "the band renamed themselves as Hybrid Theory after Bennington joined the band". (SUDUSER)85 18:17, 19 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Whisky[9] - end of the paragraph and no fullstop?
  • Linkin Park had produced a nine-track demo tape
  • and also played forty-two
  • lasted four weeks that were spent re-recording the songs off of the demo tape - off of is not well written, remove 'of'
  • , isolation[14] and also disappointments and aftermath feelings of failed relationships.[15] Remove "and also" and add a comma
  • Four singles off of the album
  • All Music Guide should be in italics
    •  Done "All Music Guide" has been italicized. (SUDUSER)85 18:17, 19 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

M3tal H3ad (talk) 08:55, 19 November 2007 (UTC)  Done All issues addressed by M3tal H3ad have been corrected. (SUDUSER)85 05:23, 21 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support. Quite informative with the issues above being fixed. But is there any info on art cover avaliable? --Brand спойт 18:39, 21 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • I tried searching for sources relating to the artwork, but the cases were: there were not reliable or there wasn't anything about it. Sorry. (SUDUSER)85 05:17, 23 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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