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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was promoted by Ian Rose 08:14, 9 July 2014 [1].

Harta Berdarah edit

Nominator(s):  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:39, 25 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hello everyone, I'm back with another film written by Saeroen and produced by Union Films. Like our previous FAs Sorga Ka Toedjoe and Asmara Moerni, I built this article around a novelization found at Taman Siswa's library. Harta Berdarah is a cautionary tale about valuing money over social obligations and the needs of society. Sadly, it is a lost film, and little documentation survives. This article has had a wonderful peer review by Wehwalt and User:SchroCat, and is now ready to be presented to you. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:39, 25 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Another gem of an article about a lost film: an interesting read, very nicely put together, and certainly worthy of FA status. - SchroCat (talk) 15:18, 25 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Thanks for all of your help at PR, and the review here. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:23, 25 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support Another peer reviewer heard from. I had my say there, and my concerns were addressed. Another worthy addition to the canon of articles on vanished Indonesian films.--Wehwalt (talk) 15:54, 25 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • And thank you for being there to "witness" them. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:03, 25 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments Support from Taylor Trescott

  • Any objection to making the release date in the infobox say "October 1940"?
  • "Cinematography for the production was completed by KH Tjit" Can't say I'm a huge fan of "completed" in this instance. Makes it sound like he stepped in to finish somebody else's job.
  • A translation for Bloedgeld should be included
  • It's still Bloody Treasure or (maybe) Blood Gold, so I didn't include it. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:53, 25 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 22:18, 25 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support Personally I found "new hire" a bit odd as a very American term in a part of the world beyond the US sphere, but given your country of origin I can't really object to that (: Good luck Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:14, 28 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]
    • Well, since this is supposed to be BrE, we can't have that. Tried editing. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:21, 28 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Images are appropriately captioned and licensed. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:58, 28 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - spotchecks not done

  • Quote should be cited in the lead
  • Be consistent in whether you abbreviate page ranges. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:35, 9 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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