Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Fountain pen/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was archived by Laser brain via FACBot (talk) 02:07, 26 July 2016 [1].
This article is about... the historical background, mechanisms and accessories to the humble fountain pen. I am aware that this article was demoted from Featured Article status in 2006. This article's contributors have made the necessary revisions (as per the removal notes), thoroughly developing the article and paying attention to the Manual of Style encyclopaedic format. The extensive variety of nibs, filling mechanisms, inks and cartridges is comprehensively explored. Thank you for your consideration! Seba5tien (talk/contribs) 21:13, 25 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Oppose, recommend withdrawal -- sorry but this nom is premature, I haven't checked prose quality but extensive sections of the text are uncited; I would suggest that after researching and referencing the article should be taken to Peer Review before considering another FAC nomination. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 23:38, 25 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Oppose, recommend withdrawal many uncited statements and very poor referencing formatting. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 00:16, 26 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Oppose. I just started a GA review (Talk:Fountain pen/GA1) and it's not currently at GA level, although it has the potential to get there within the review. As such FA is premature. —David Eppstein (talk) 00:57, 26 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. --Laser brain (talk) 02:07, 26 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.