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Rhydymwyn

Thank you for your comments. Can I first refer you to WP:MoS:

• Section headers do not use capital letters other than the first word, e.g. sentence style, so your changes are not compliant.
• Wikipedia does not support advertising, see WP:Spam, providing contact telephone numbers within the article can be regarded as spam.

My additions of wikilinks to the Ministry of Supply and Mustard Gas are entirely appropriate, as the words are already in the article. If these words are offensive to you, one way around the problem is to create a separate article on The Valley Works, provide a link to that article and provide a summary of the text within Rhydymwyn.Pyrotec (talk) 08:32, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

I've tried to make the article as neutral as possible, which is why I removed the "how to visit the site" from one of the section titles. The telephone details could be regarded as spam and could be removed by other editors. The number, however, is available here: [1] - perhaps the "trick" may be to make better use of the External links section.

The following sentence "The valley is beautiful and makes an impression on all who visit it." might also be regarded as failing WP:NPOV, so it might also be removed or greatly modified - perhaps it is worth looking at first.

I will create an article on H. M. Valley Factory and link it into Rhydymyn, using {main}, you can then adjust what is in Rhydymyn article.

Pyrotec (talk) 10:53, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

The article looks much better, now. I've added an Info box, but I have not populated all the lines, as I'm not certain what should go in them. Some photos would improve the article. I note that this - [2] has a Creative Commons Licence so it could be loaded into Wiki Commons (with the appropriate licence/acknowledgements), there are another four on the same OS reference which might appeal to you more. You might also wish to look at this guide Wikipedia:WikiProject UK geography/How to write about settlements.Pyrotec (talk) 13:06, 25 November 2008 (UTC)