Shom.analytics

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sahajidah Hai-O Marketing (December 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Naraht was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Naraht (talk) 03:52, 1 December 2023 (UTC)

Hello, Shom.analytics! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Naraht (talk) 03:52, 1 December 2023 (UTC)

Hi Naraht, thanks for reaching out! And thanks for reviewing my article.

Yes it is quite a challenge for me as it is my first time editing one. I've edited it to contain a more neutral style of writing. However, I feel like the history and CSR parts are ones that I should cut down on.

Would that be wiser to do so? As certain events are pre internet events and my country does not have too many pre internet related article links. Shom.analytics (talk) 09:15, 1 December 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sahajidah Hai-O Marketing (December 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Stuartyeates was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Sahajidah Hai-O Marketing and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Stuartyeates (talk) 08:44, 1 December 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sahajidah Hai-O Marketing (March 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Sahajidah Hai-O Marketing and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Theroadislong (talk) 10:23, 19 March 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Sahajidah Hai-O Marketing has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Sahajidah Hai-O Marketing. Thanks! Greenman (talk) 07:16, 25 March 2024 (UTC)