Sanaz Alavi
Joined 4 January 2011
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Topher385 in topic Your submission at Articles for creation
Shokufeh Kavani edit
Hi, you can sign your comments automatically using four tildes ~~~~ All sorts of problems.
- It is now wikipedia policy that biographical articles about living people must have independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts or show that it meets the notability guidelines. Although you gave references, they were not in-line, so it was hard to see what facts they were supporting, and they were given as a string of bare urls, which makes it difficult to see what they are linked to.
- The article contains promotional claims unsupported by in-line references eg
- She is primarily renowned
- The book has magnificent black and white photos
- There is also new approach about the history of Mevlevieh‘s sect over the last 100 years and their music which makes the book unique.
- which had gain lots of attention by the Australian Media.
- She continued on exhibiting her works which led her to so many great challenges
- has gained very positive feedback and reviews by the public and very tough critics such
- The list of exhibitions needs in-line references
- There are no wikilinks in the article, which makes it look as if it has been cut-and-pasted from another source, possibly in breach of copyright
- If you do recreate, note that you should not include the Persian transcription in the article title
Jimfbleak - talk to me? 11:18, 5 January 2011 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation edit
{{subst:AFC submission/submit}} to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Topher385 (talk) 17:07, 25 July 2011 (UTC)